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This is an abomination! You should be dragged by wild horses through the town and stoned to death for making such an FSMawful film!
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Film intro

Postby Dr Dagger » Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:58 pm

This is an intro to a made up film called 'Tremor' that me and my friends made. Tell me what you think. (Be honest, it's just a video)
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Postby Detective TurtleHolmes » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:53 am

Looks pretty good, except for a few spelling and grammar errors. Which one is you?
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Postby Dr Dagger » Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:17 am

I did not do the captions. I'm the one on the left by the tree, the one on the left by the lockers and the one in the lift.
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Postby Moral Minority » Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:43 am

Nice one. :fsm_float:
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Postby farfalla » Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:04 am

like the phone ringing - and next?
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Postby Dr Dagger » Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:23 am

This was a one-off, set up by my school.
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Postby Rainswept » Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:23 am

"Everyone's" needs an apostrophe in it.

I liked it.
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Postby Dr Dagger » Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:48 am

I know, we had to rush the captions. We were going to do a radio broadcast in the background but we didn't have enough time.
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Postby Cpt. No-Beard Scallywag » Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:53 am

It made me laugh, so it might be a bit over the top if you are trying to be serious, but its perfect if you want a bit of comedy splashed in with the drama.
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Postby Dr Dagger » Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:09 pm

Kinda trying to be serious, but the lift and keyboard scenes were a bit of a laugh.
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Postby lordpunkmonk » Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:57 pm

tremor?

sounds a bit to much like tremors
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Postby Dr Dagger » Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:29 am

I've never heard of it!

Ps. The promo poster looks like Jaws.
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Postby lordpunkmonk » Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:05 am

Dr Dagger wrote:The promo poster looks like Jaws.


thats the point of the poster
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